Lisa&Milena, an erotic novel about big breasted girls

[flowers65]

Hi everybody.
It's the first time I post here, so I'hope what I'm doing it's fine: if not just let me know.
I wrote an erotic novel, and published the first chapter on a blog,
http://lisaandmilena.blogspot.com.
Hope you like it: I'm going to post all the chapters one by one in the next weeks.
Critics and suggestions are obviously welcome.
Thanks, Flower

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

I read it and would like to express my encouragement to keep going. It was entertaining to read.

But in my first read I caught three typos. I have no idea if there a conflict with the blog software or just an oversight, but be careful.

My favorite part of chapter was:

her big breasts, whose weight could be guessed from the smooth curve formed by them resting on the chest, however, seemed to ignore the power of gravity, almost in an impertinent way.

And also nice picture as well.


Best of luck.

[flowers65]

The drawing is mine, even if I did it a long time ago.
Thanks for your support, Flower

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

If you add an image like that with each update... You will get quite a following from all the BBL from the various BE sites.





BBL: Big Boobie Lovers....

[rtpoe]

From a quick look, I get the feeling that English might not be your first language. I can suggest that you find a native English speaker to go over the chapters before you post them.

You have a very good story, and I think you've got a fine writing style. You just need a little bit of polish to really make it shine.

[flowers65]

You're right, Rtpoe, I'm Italian. Anyone who wants to help me with the language is welcome.
I could just send my translation to him, and he could adjust it in a few minutes, I think.
Let me know, Flower.

[flowers65]

If anybody is interested, Third chapter is on.
Thanks, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Four is on.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Five is on.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Seven is on.
Bye, Flower

[tarquin]

Chapter 7 excellent! I like where the story is going, and I love how the "personality" of Lisa is developing. Check your private messages - let me know if I can help with translation/story. Thanks for writing this.

[flowers65]

Thanks, Tarquin.
As you may notice, English is not my native language, so if you want to help me, you could grab the chapters I'm posting, correct them and send them to me by mail at
flowers65@virgilio.it.

Thanks in advance, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Eight is on line.
I have this guy, Tarquin, helping me with the translation, and he's doing a really god work.
We are also revisiting alla the previous chapters.
English version is gonna be much better from now on.
Thanks everybody, Flower.

[flowers65]

Hi everybody: chapter Nine is on.
Hope you're liking it:would like to hear
your opinions about.
Thanks, Flower

[flowers65]

Hi everybody, I posted chapter ten and eleven.
waiting for your feedback.
Bye Flower.

[flowers65]

Posted Chapter twelve on my blog.
Thanks, Flower.

[flowers65]

Posted Chapter 13.
Waiting for feedback,Bye Flower.

[MrHHH]

Flower, I think it's unfair to expect feedback every time you post a chapter.

[flowers65]

Okay, to me it's a way to speak about our common passion: if you don't like it, I'll quit, no problem.
You can clear it up any time you want.
Bye, Flower.

[MrHHH]

Huh?

You can post every time you add a new chapter. I don't have a problem with that.

But if someone gave you feedback on each and every chapter you posted, that would be quite a lot. I don't think I've ever seen anyone post that much feedback for one story.

[rtpoe]

Ah, but someone may be coming across the story for the first time!

In which case, asking for feedback is appropriate.

Personally, I don't see a problem with Flowers65's reminding us that feedback is always welcome.

[MrHHH]

Well, if she's just reminding people, that's cool, but "Waiting for feedback" sounds like she's not going to update until she gets feedback.

I could be just interpreting it wrong.

[flowers65]

Posted chapter fourteen.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Fifteen is on.
Have a good reading (Is it correct?) Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Sixteen is on.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Seventeen is on.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

Chapter Eighteen is on.
Bye, Flower.

[flowers65]

In summertime it's hard to get back on work, but after a long time,
I have update my blog with chapter nineteen.
Have a good read, Flower.

[flowers65]

Hi everybody, I've update my novel with chapter twenty.
Getting closer to the end...
Flower.